为你支招小作文（三） | 5月18日真题，数据体现出来的事实该怎
福州雅思培训作者：朗阁海外考试中心 时间:2019-06-05 11:08
摘要：高分范文及解析 以美国和韩国的那两条线为例。这样写： Americas urban population has gradually grown to 80 percent, and it is forecast to grow further and slowly to 82 percent. In South Korea, the early 40-year period witnessed a surge from 40 percent
America’s urban population has gradually grown to 80 percent, and it is forecast to grow further and slowly to 82 percent. In South Korea, the early 40-year period witnessed a surge from 40 percent to 76 percent. Since 2010, the growth has been sluggish, and, by 2030, the urban population is projected to account for 80 percent of the country’s total population.?
Although?South Korea?started at a relatively low level (40 percent), the country kept catching up with the US at a rapid rate and achieved the same high level of urbanization (nearly 80 percent) in 2010, whereas the US, during the same 40-year period, saw a slow growth in the percentage of urban population. A?neck-and-neck?situation has since been witnessed, and a continuation is anticipated.?
我们再以《胡敏雅思第七代教材（高能版）》Page 95的表格里的部分信息为例，体会“描述数据体现出来的事实” (describe what the statistics represent / indicate) 这个“高能”写法：
The four countries’ travelers are most likely to drive and least likely to cycle. However, the Netherlands is an exception in the use of bicycles, as cycling is a popular means of transport just after driving, making roughly a quarter of all trips. The country is also noticeable for cars, the chief means of traveling, makes barely half of people’s journeys. In addition, Americans’ heavy reliance on cars is also noteworthy, since as many as 90 percent of journeys are made by car.?